How is this song I've written, plz rate and opinions?

yeah its pretty good! i could tell what the song was about towards the end. if its a true story what a freaking jerk!! just one thing i would say is that the chorus might just be a little short, in my head i can see it being a little bit longer to really illustrate your feelings but thats just me. i really like the second verse and the bridge though :) hope this helps :)